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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Lion and the Lamb

    This was very interesting. I liked it. It was descriptive and twisting. I thought that it was very beautiful. My favorite line was She was gone, he was going. I ...

    Nov 21, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: That's What Life Is (Extract 1)

    counting each beat her heart makes . Instead of "heart makes" it should be "heart made " “ Come pull up a chair Becka . Why don’t you get a ...

    Nov 20, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Why I Do What I Do....

    It helps me feel.....ALIVE because inside I'm dead because no one cares if I'm dead or alive it's the only way I can survive The only thing that I have ...

    Nov 20, 2008


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